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'Pirates' - Page 5

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Excellent.
A lot of people have commented on this little five part ditty, so I'll throw my shoe into the hold.
I've read a lot of manga, so I feel qualified to say what I enjoyed, and what I enjoyed about them.

Your comic art is excellent for someone on her first project. There's just a tiny bit of roughness around the edges (I think certain aspects could be cleaner, but I'm even hard pressed to say what exactly), but it's almost unfair how far along you are for a non-professional. It's all great, your panel layout is clear, and the composition aids the story. The action scene was plenty good.
Overall, I'd say the writing for this piece is the least polished, but I think I'm just a writing snob, and besides, you can do good composition, that's nine-tenths of the deal, as far as I'm concerned. As I said before, it's great for an effort from someone still in college!
I must say, the ending was a really good idea, and you pulled it off really well.
I love the people sitting around on deck chairs on page four, it's cool ^__^

Hey, if you do major in comics, I'm sure that the industry won't be disappointed by this new entry. Of course, I'm sure you'll be able to do some pretty cool things in the animation industry too.